Mrs Kelley's Monster

This particular essay was extremely descriptive and Jon Franklin was able to use amazing detail to help set the scene and incite emotion from the reader. You couldn't help but feel horrible for Mrs. Kelley when you heard what she was going through, and the doctors decision whether to operate or not. Jon Franklin did an awesome setting an unbelievably vivid setting when he was in the operation room. It got to the point where you felt as if you were watching one of those doctor shows. Franklin using such tense and pressure situations leaves us the reader wanting more and we can't help but keep reading to see what is going to happen with Mrs. Kelley. He had a way of using really powerful quotes to get his message across and bring emotion to the story. When Mrs. Kelley says "I'm not afraid to die," it really makes you understand just how far Mrs. Kelley has come and that she just wants to feel better or be done with "the monster".